PLEASE NOTE that as of December 1, 2013 I will no longer be accepting new submissions for critique. My own writing workload and deadlines have left no time for additional work at this time.
Please consider these very talented individuals who also provide critique services for children's book manuscripts:
Emma Dryden at DrydenBks
Nikki Bruno Clapper
Various authors listed by Cynthia Leitich Smith.
My apologies for your trouble, and best of luck with your writing and publishing!!